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Dominik Posted 16 years ago
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Could you check this please?

*When did you start freediving?
-I made my first freedive in 2001.
*How have you discovered that you have a talent for freediving?
-Well, I have been a good swimmer since a very young age. Later, I found that I could hold my breath for a long time under water.
*How many world records have you broken?
- I have broken three so far. But I hope to break more.
*Have you had any scary moments?
-No, not really. Some sharks have swum past me in one occasion, but they wasn't interested in me!

Can you check this in red, please? (BrE)

Thanks in advance!
  

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Hi, *When did you start freediving? -I made my first freedive in 2001. *How did you discover that you have a talent for freediving?

  • Hi, *When did you start freediving?
  • -I made my first freedive in 2001.
  • *How did you discover that you have a talent for freediving?
  • -Well, I was a good swimmer at a very young age.
  • Later , I found that I could hold my breath for a long time under water.
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Hi,

*When did you start freediving?
-I made my first freedive in 2001.
*How did you discover that you have a talent for freediving?
-Well, I was a good swimmer at a very young age. Later, I found that I could hold my breath for a long time under water.
*How many world records have you broken?
- I have broken three so far. But I hope to break more.
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Terrible mistakes. Thanks for correction.

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