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Gillyflower Posted 6 years ago
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Could you check this paragraph please?

Hi,

"Musculoskeletal disorders can also affect a person's quality of life, leading to a reduced quality of life (4). Librarians are among those who experience diseases such as back pain, wrist pain, and neck pain due to sitting for a long time, carrying books without a wheel, or excessive use of computers. These musculoskeletal injuries in the neck, shoulders, and wrists lead to reduced efficiency and work efficiency."

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Musculoskeletal disorders can also impair a person's quality of life, leading to a reduced quality of life (4) . Librarians are among those who experience diseases such as back pain, wrist pain, and neck pain. T hese are often due to sitting for a long time, carrying books without a cart wheel , or excessive use of computers.

  • Musculoskeletal disorders can also impair a person's quality of life, leading to a reduced quality of life (4) .
  • Librarians are among those who experience diseases such as back pain, wrist pain, and neck pain.
  • T hese are often due to sitting for a long time, carrying books without a cart wheel , or excessive use of computers.
  • " back pain, wrist pain, and neck pain.
  • In this one paragraph you refer to these as disorders.
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Musculoskeletal disorders can also impair a person's quality of life, leading to a reduced quality of life (4). Librarians are among those who experience diseases such as back pain, wrist pain, and neck pain. These are often due to sitting for a long time, carrying books without a cart wheel, or excessive use of computers. These musculoskeletal injuries in t

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