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Gillyflower Posted 6 years ago
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Could you check this paragraph please?

Hi,

Could you check the following paragraph please?

"The presence of musculoskeletal pain and burnout can influence the quality of services provided by librarians working in libraries; therefore, the present study has been designed with the aim of investigating the prevalence of musculoskeletal pain and existence of burnout among librarians working in libraries affiliated to X University of Medical Sciences."


Thanks!

  

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Things are normally affiliated "with" other things. You say you will investigate "prevalance", but does that apply to both "musculoskeletal pain" and "existence of burnout"? "Burnout" seems to be a rather slangy term for a serious study.

  • Things are normally affiliated "with" other things.
  • You say you will investigate "prevalance", but does that apply to both "musculoskeletal pain" and "existence of burnout"?
  • "Burnout" seems to be a rather slangy term for a serious study.
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Things are normally affiliated "with" other things. You say you will investigate "prevalance", but does that apply to both "musculoskeletal pain" and "existence of burnout"? "Burnout" seems to be a rather slangy term for a serious study.

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