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Gillyflower Posted 6 years ago
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Could you check this paragraph please?

Hi,

Could you check this paragraph please?

"Noise is considered as one of the most influential physical factors in working environments. Due to industrial developments, it has become a threat to the global and even the mental health of individuals. Over the past twenty years, there are many evidences that show a relation between the impact of external factors, lifestyle and socioeconomic status. The purpose of this research is to investigate the association of noise annoyance with socioeconomic status in employees of an electrical panel manufacture."


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gillyflower "Noise is considered as one of the most influential physical factors in working environments. Due to industrial developments , it has become a threat to the global and even the mental health of individuals. Over the past twenty years, there are many evidences that show a relation between the impact of external factors, lifestyle and socioeconomic status.

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  • gillyflower "Noise is considered as one of the most influential physical factors in working environments.
  • Due to industrial developments , it has become a threat to the global and even the mental health of individuals.
  • Over the past twenty years, there are many evidences that show a relation between the impact of external factors, lifestyle and socioeconomic status.
  • " I don't understand the highlighted parts.
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gillyflower"Noise is considered as one of the most influential physical factors in working environments. Due to industrial developments, it has become a threat to the global and even the mental health of individuals. Over the past twenty years, there are many evidences that show
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gillyflowerNoise is considered as one of the most influential physical factors in working environments. Due to ever-increasing industrial activity, developments, it has become a threat to the global and even the physical and
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