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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could you check this paragraph please?

Hi,

Could you check this paragraph please?

"Education is a learning-based experience that aims to create gradual and permanent changes in individuals so that they can improve their ability to perform tasks. Typically, education can change skills, knowledge, attitudes, and social and organizational behavior. The KAP survey is defined as a way of gathering information about knowledge and comprehension, the predefined beliefs and feelings of the staff, and how to perform knowledge and attitudes are on the basis of the goal."


Thanks!

  

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I find the last sentence difficult to grasp. is there some way to write it mor clearly and simply? how to perform knowledge and attitudes are on the basis of the goal This part in particular is not correct grammar .

  • I find the last sentence difficult to grasp.
  • is there some way to write it mor clearly and simply?
  • how to perform knowledge and attitudes are on the basis of the goal This part in particular is not correct grammar .
  • Clive
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I find the last sentence difficult to grasp. is there some way to write it mor clearly and simply?

how to perform knowledge and attitudes are on the basis of the goal This part in particular is not correct grammar.

Clive

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