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Gillyflower Posted 7 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could you check this paragraph please?

Hi,

Could you check the below paragraph please?

"This is a pretest-posttest study conducted upon the intervention group and the control group. 170 workers of the textile industry exposed to excessive noise (85 individuals in the intervention group and 85 in the control group) were randomly selected and studied. The distribution of the sound pressure level was first determined at the mentioned industry. Then, the level of the individual's noise annoyance was assessed using the ISO 15666 questionnaire and their knowledge, attitude and performance using the KAP questionnaire. The instructional package was prepared based on expert's opinion and the initial assessment, and the questionnaires were completed after the instructional intervention."

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gillyflower pretest-posttest I might make that: pre-test vs post-test gillyflower workers of the textile industry workers in the textile industry OR textile-industry workers gillyflower sound pressure level Is this the correct terminology? I though noise levels were measured in decibels, so something like "noise levels" or "noise levels were mapped/determined". Or "high level decibels areas were mapped".

  • gillyflower pretest-posttest I might make that: pre-test vs post-test gillyflower workers of the textile industry workers in the textile industry OR textile-industry workers gillyflower sound pressure level Is this the correct terminology?
  • I though noise levels were measured in decibels, so something like "noise levels" or "noise levels were mapped/determined".
  • Or "high level decibels areas were mapped".
  • gillyflower at the mentioned industry in the above-mentioned industry.
  • Does this refer to average levels or were studies done at each site where the study group members worked?
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gillyflowerpretest-posttest

I might make that: pre-test vs post-test

gillyflowerworkers of the textile industry

workers in the textile industry OR textile-industry workers

gillyflowersound pressure level

Is this the correct terminology? I though noise levels were measured

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