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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
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Could you check this paragraph for its flow and any grammatical errors?

He says that it's time to start off, but we should wait here for a while because the weather looks bad. He thinks that if we leave now, we may get caught in a thunderstorm. So he suggests that we stay here for about two hours and see if the weather improves. If not, he wants to postpone our departure until tomorrow.
  

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I've read it a few times, and I'm still confused. It seems to be logically flawed.

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  • I've read it a few times, and I'm still confused.
  • It seems to be logically flawed.
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I've read it a few times, and I'm still confused. It seems to be logically flawed.
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It seems pretty clear to me, the weather is too bad to leave now, so let's see if it improves in a couple of hours, otherwise wait until tomorrow.
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teacherJapanHe says that it's time to start off, but we should wait...
He says that although this is when we originally planned to start, we should wait...
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Thank you very much for your idea:)
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