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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Could you check this paragraph about words?
Words are not perfect when it comes to communicating information. For example, if you try to convey to others how beautiful the sky looks when the sun is setting, there is no doubt that in most cases, pictures are far more effective than words.
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I think it is fine, but I have a few suggestions. In most cases can be tagged with the first sentence, which conveys a general idea. if you are trying to convey..
- I think it is fine, but I have a few suggestions.
- In most cases can be tagged with the first sentence, which conveys a general idea.
- if you are trying to convey..
- ) because you seem to describe the act as it is being done.
- teacherJapan Words are not perfect when it comes to communicating information in most cases.
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I think it is fine, but I have a few suggestions.
In most cases can be tagged with the first sentence, which conveys a general idea.
I think you can consider using present progressive ( ...if you are trying to convey..) because you seem to describe the act as it is being done.
In most cases can be tagged with the first sentence, which conveys a general idea.
I think you can consider using present progressive ( ...if you are trying to convey..) because you seem to describe the act as it is being done.
teacherJapan Words are not perfect when it comes to communi
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