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TeacherJapan Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could you check this paragraph about the human mind?

Everyone has psychological wounds. All too often, however, some people lead their lives without being aware of them and unknowingly hurt other people. How do such wounds heal? Since ancient times, it has been thought that only religion can heal them. Various religions have done so by using their unique doctrines and methods. However, in modern times, some people started to become skeptical about religion and argue that a method called psychotherapy can heal psychological wounds in an "scientific" way. It may be effective for those who believe in such a "science," but I am sure that it won't take you long to realize that no scientific method is effective enough to heal the human mind.
  
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