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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Could you check this paragraph about song?
Everyone has a particular song which has a very significant meaning to them. Every time you hear the song, you somehow remember that it has changed something inside you. When you first heard it, you probably didn't realize it, but years later, you realize it was "the" song. I am no exception. if I hadn't had an opportunity to hear a song like that, I might not keep listening to American contemporary songs as I do now.
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Be careful not to change point of view. You start the paragraph in 3rd person singular, but from the second and third sentences are in the second person. The last three sentences are in the first person singular.
- Be careful not to change point of view.
- You start the paragraph in 3rd person singular, but from the second and third sentences are in the second person.
- The last three sentences are in the first person singular.
- Decide what point of view you want to use and be consistent.
- , which makes good sense.
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Be careful not to change point of view. You start the paragraph in 3rd person singular, but from the second and third sentences are in the second person. The last three sentences are in the first person singular. Decide what point of view you want to use and be consistent. You explain the concept in the 3rd p.s., which makes good sense. It would be all right to continue in the 3rd p.s. until you s
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Thank you very much for your additional comment, too. I'll just stick to the rules for written English, especially when I do some formal writing.
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