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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Could you check this paragraph?
Hi, this is Top Gear Tv Show. I've written the description of the show. Can someone please check for me whether is this paragraph incomple or hanging? Thank you
This fast-paced and stunt-filled car show takes the public's passion for cars, performing extreme stunts and challenges to see what the featured cars are capable of doing, the world's biggest car
This fast-paced and stunt-filled car show takes the public's passion for cars, performing extreme stunts and challenges to see what the featured cars are capable of doing, the world's biggest car
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The construction "takes ~ to see what ~" does not work. "the world's biggest car" does not have a proper connection to the rest of the sentence.
- The construction "takes ~ to see what ~" does not work.
- "the world's biggest car" does not have a proper connection to the rest of the sentence.
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The construction "takes ~ to see what ~" does not work.
"the world's biggest car" does not have a proper connection to the rest of the sentence.
"the world's biggest car" does not have a proper connection to the rest of the sentence.
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Ok noted. How about this?
Top Gear is a popular television series that features creative ways to test drive automobiles and also performing extreme stunts and challenges to understand what the featured cars are capable of doing.
Top Gear is a popular television series that features creative ways to test drive automobiles and also performing extreme stunts and challenges to understand what the featured cars are capable of doing.
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Please give your feedback?
1. Rev up your engines for some automotive mayhem in this popular series, as the hosts and celebrities bring you more exciting test-drive with the latest models and embark on the wildest road trips ever.
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2. Top Gear is a popular television series that features creative ways to test drive automobiles and also performing extreme stunts and challenges to
1. Rev up your engines for some automotive mayhem in this popular series, as the hosts and celebrities bring you more exciting test-drive with the latest models and embark on the wildest road trips ever.
Or
2. Top Gear is a popular television series that features creative ways to test drive automobiles and also performing extreme stunts and challenges to
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