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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
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Could you check this paragraph?

You may be able to stimulate your brain by moving your whole body and using your voice. It seems that it is no accident that some Greek philosophers deepen their thinking by walking around and talking with others. If you try think without engaging in these activities, you may end up reaching a dead end and finding no way out.
  

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You may be able to stimulate your brain by moving your whole body and using your voice. ) their thinking by walking around and talking with others. If you try to think without engaging in these activities, you may end up reaching a dead end and finding no way out.

— Blue Jay

  • You may be able to stimulate your brain by moving your whole body and using your voice.
  • ) their thinking by walking around and talking with others.
  • If you try to think without engaging in these activities, you may end up reaching a dead end and finding no way out.
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You may be able to stimulate your brain by moving your whole body and using your voice. It seems that it is no accident that some Greek philosophers deepened (if you are talking about Aristotle, Socrates etc.) their thinking by walking around and talking with others. If you try to
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Oh, I forgot to put "to" after "think." I see, I understand that I should've used "deepen." Thank you very much, Blue Jay:)
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teacherJapanI understand that I should've used "deepen."
Deepened! (unless you are talking about modern-day Greek philosophers)
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Ah, I am sorry!!! I meant to say so:( Thank you very much for pointing that out:)
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