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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Could you check this paragraph?
Hi:) This is a translation exercise, so I can't change its content.
The most boring conversations can be interesting to people who are actually engaged in them. Depending on what situations they are in, they find themselves fascinated by and absorbed in them. This is another aspect of daily conversation.
The most boring conversations can be interesting to people who are actually engaged in them. Depending on what situations they are in, they find themselves fascinated by and absorbed in them. This is another aspect of daily conversation.
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teacherJapan I can't change its content Then what are we supposed to do for you?
- teacherJapan I can't change its content Then what are we supposed to do for you?
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teacherJapanI can't change its contentThen what are we supposed to do for you?
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You are right. I've decided to use this opportunity to improve my writing skills instead of my students', so I'd really appreciate it if you could point out some parts which don't make sense or sound unnatural from a narive speaker's point of view:)
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Then this is what I would do:
The most boring conversations can be fascinating to those who are engaged in them. This is another aspect of daily conversation.
The rest is repetitive or redundant.
The most boring conversations can be fascinating to those who are engaged in them. This is another aspect of daily conversation.
The rest is repetitive or redundant.
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Ah, I see!! That's a lot better and easier to read than the previous one:) Thank you very much for your suggestion:)
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