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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
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After a while, an orangutan glanced at me again and looked a little confused. He took another glance at an apple in his hand and
looked at me once again, who is standing outside the cage. He came closer to me slowly and tried to give it to me as if to say, "Do you want some?" It seemed to me that he thought that it's not good to eat the apple by himself." Of course, I didn't look at him because I wanted him to share it with me, so I declined his generous offer. He continued to eat it, looking somehow relieved.
looked at me once again, who is standing outside the cage. He came closer to me slowly and tried to give it to me as if to say, "Do you want some?" It seemed to me that he thought that it's not good to eat the apple by himself." Of course, I didn't look at him because I wanted him to share it with me, so I declined his generous offer. He continued to eat it, looking somehow relieved.
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After a while, an orangutan glanced at me again and looked a little confused. He took another glance at an the apple in his hand and looked at me once again, who is standing as I stood outside the cage. " It seemed to me that he thought that it's not good to eat the apple by himse lf.
- After a while, an orangutan glanced at me again and looked a little confused.
- He took another glance at an the apple in his hand and looked at me once again, who is standing as I stood outside the cage.
- " It seemed to me that he thought that it's not good to eat the apple by himse lf.
- Of course, I didn't look at him because I wanted him to share it with me , so I declined his generous offer.
- He continued to eat it, looking somehow relieved.
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After a while, an orangutan glanced at me again and looked a little confused. He took another glance at an the apple in his hand and looked at me once again, who is standing as I stood outside the cage. He came closer towards me slowly and tried to give it to me
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I see! Thank you for your suggestions.! As for the last part, does it make more sense if I say, "I was just observing his behavior and didn't mean to urge him to share the apple with me."
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