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TeacherJapan Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Could you check this paragraph?

Actually, this is a translation exercise, so I can't change its content:)

As we use language, we realize that it has power in many ways. It can make us happy or sad, and motivates us to do something. Those are just an example of what language can actually do. In some cases, verbal violence can even hurt us more than physical violence.
  

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As we use language, we realize that it has power in many ways. It can make us happy or sad and motivate us to do something. Those are just examples of what language can actually do.

  • As we use language, we realize that it has power in many ways.
  • It can make us happy or sad and motivate us to do something.
  • Those are just examples of what language can actually do.
  • In some cases, verbal violence can even hurt us more than physical violence.
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As we use language, we realize that it has power in many ways. It can make us happy or sad and motivate us to do something. Those are just examples of what language can actually do. In some cases, verbal violence can even hurt us more than physical violence.
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Ah!! I didn't notice those mistakes myself! Thank you very much for pointing that out:)

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