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Safrar Posted 12 years ago
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Could you check this paragraph?

One morning, she noticed just a picture of an invoive sent by her friend on her phone, but she was too busy to message him. That evening, she got a message from him. It said, "I sent you a gift today." She managed to reply, "I've learned from your picture. I'm looking forward to it!"
  

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What's an 'invoive'?

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What's an 'invoive'?
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Thank you for your response, Clive. Maybe it's a 'shipping receipt,' not an 'invoive' after I googled it, but I'm still not sure. It is a sheet of paper that you write your address on when you send a package.
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'Saw' is better than 'noticed' here. 'Noticed' implies just by accident.

I suggest eg One morning, she saw on her phone a shipping notice sent by her friend, but she was too busy to message him. That evening, she got a message from him. It said, "I sent you a gift today." She replied, "I learned that from the notice you sen
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Thank you for your advice. That is very helpful. I've just tried these. Could you check them, too?

It said, "I sent you a gift today."
It said that he had sent her a gift that day.

She replied, "I learned that from the notice you sent. I'm looking forward to it!"
She replied that she had learned that from the notice he had sent and that she was looking forward to it.
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I've just tried these. Could you check them, too?

It said, "I sent you a gift today."
It said that he had sent her a gift that day.

OK


She replied, "I learned that from the notice you sent. I'm looking forward to it!"
She replied that she had learned that from the notice he had sent and that she was looking forward to it.
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