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Chris Gueffroy was shot at Berlin Wall in February 1989. He was the last East Germany citizen to pay his life for the escape to the West. In November 1989 the Berlin Wall happened.

An fatal error braught Chris Gueffroy to the Idea that He could escape out of DDR in February 1989. Because an familiar soldier told him that the order of the gunfire had released. The twenty-year-old waiter decided to flee with his friend over the wall. In the afternoon of February 5, 1989, both hid themselves in an allotment right near the boundary. But their escape failed.
  

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Chris Gueffroy was shot at the Berlin Wall in February 1989. He was the last East Germany citizen to pay with his life for his attempt to escape to the West. In November 1989 the Berlin Wall was broken .

  • Chris Gueffroy was shot at the Berlin Wall in February 1989.
  • He was the last East Germany citizen to pay with his life for his attempt to escape to the West.
  • In November 1989 the Berlin Wall was broken .
  • A fatal error brought Chris Gueffroy to the idea that he could escape out of the DDR : a soldier friend told him that the orders for gunfire had ceased .
  • The twenty-year-old waiter decided to flee with his friend over the wall.
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Chris Gueffroy was shot at the Berlin Wall in February 1989. He was the last East Germany citizen to pay with his life for his attempt to escape to the West. In November 1989 the Berlin Wall was broken.

A fatal error brought Chris Gueffroy to the idea that he could escape out of the DDR: a soldier friend told him that the orders

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