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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Could you check this one?
My uncle passed away two weeks ago. Then his wife asked me to thank note
to his acquaintance in the United States in English because he sent her the funeral
offerings after her husband's death. So, I wrote a thank note in English for her.
Could you check it if it is ok or not.
Let me add this. the acquaintance (male) wants to visit and stay several nights to
visit my uncle's grave. However, my aunt want to refuse it because she, herself is
not in good health, She can't afford to offer hospitality to him. So, she wants to
decline his offer. (without hurting his feeling).
Would you take that into your considertation before you will read the following
letter ? Thank you.
Thank you very much for your gift after my husband’s passing.
My family and I greatly appreciate your thoughts.
Our house will be under downsizing construction soon. It will take several months.
I will have a lot on my plate until that construction completes.
So, I am afraid that I will not be able to offer my hospitality to you if
you will visit us in July.
Your consideration is enough for us.
My husband is now in heaven and I believe he is also grateful for your thoughts.
Once again I would like to express my deepest appreciation for your thoughtfulness.
With all my best wishes for your good health and prosperity.
to his acquaintance in the United States in English because he sent her the funeral
offerings after her husband's death. So, I wrote a thank note in English for her.
Could you check it if it is ok or not.
Let me add this. the acquaintance (male) wants to visit and stay several nights to
visit my uncle's grave. However, my aunt want to refuse it because she, herself is
not in good health, She can't afford to offer hospitality to him. So, she wants to
decline his offer. (without hurting his feeling).
Would you take that into your considertation before you will read the following
letter ? Thank you.
Thank you very much for your gift after my husband’s passing.
My family and I greatly appreciate your thoughts.
Our house will be under downsizing construction soon. It will take several months.
I will have a lot on my plate until that construction completes.
So, I am afraid that I will not be able to offer my hospitality to you if
you will visit us in July.
Your consideration is enough for us.
My husband is now in heaven and I believe he is also grateful for your thoughts.
Once again I would like to express my deepest appreciation for your thoughtfulness.
With all my best wishes for your good health and prosperity.
Top answer
Anonymous However, my aunt want to refuse it because she, herself is not in good health, She can't afford to offer hospitality to him. So, she wants todecline his offer. (without hurting his feeling).
- Anonymous However, my aunt want to refuse it because she, herself is not in good health, She can't afford to offer hospitality to him.
- So, she wants todecline his offer.
- (without hurting his feeling).
- You need to tell the truth of the matter.
- Construction will come to an end, but her health may be poor for a very long time.
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AnonymousHowever, my aunt want to refuse it because she, herself is not in good health, She can't afford to offer hospitality to him. So, she wants todecline his offer. (without hurting his feeling).You need to tell the truth of the matter. Construction will come to an end, but her health may be poor for a very long time.
Thank you very much for your gift
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Thank you very much for revising my letter. The revised letter really coverys my aunt's
feelings to her acquaintance. I appreciate your help.
feelings to her acquaintance. I appreciate your help.
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Hello, how can I contact your private mail? I want to ask and show my wrotten Lette rof Motivatition.Thanks
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Hi teacher.. I would like to know if using below sentence is correct while writing an official email .. " I tried calling you but no luck" ??
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Anonymous " I tried calling you but no luck" ??That is very casual. Use that for a friend.
It might be best to say nothing in a business email.
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