Could you check this essay for me?

The

internet

is undoubtedly one of the greatest inventions of all. While some

people

believe that the

internet

has made them more

extrovert

in order to socialise, others believe it makes

people

more

introvert

.

This

essay will discuss both the views following

to

the relevant example and my opinion on

this

topic.

First

of all,

to begin

with, because of

the

technological advancement,

the

communication has become quite easy as compared to the previous time. Various social media applications and websites made it convenient for anyone and everyone to contact their loved ones living miles apart. Apart from

this

, because of

degitalization

, many individuals get an opportunity to represent themselves in front of a huge group of

people

and eventually it helps

overcoming

their insecurities.

For example

, many of us are not comfortable in front of the camera but we have the knowledge that we can spread to the world.

This

has become possible with the help of YouTube and it helped many

people

to come out of their

shell

.