Could you check this e-mail?

Hi guys, I'm new on the forum so first of all I would like to say big "hello" to everyone. The message I pasted below is already sent to my former boss who is also my good friend from the United States. And I am from Poland.

What I'd like to ask you is to check this e-mail if I wrote it correctly. It isn't any homework for school. It's just for me and you. To your information I did my best to write it and I'd like to know your opinion. Maybe something should've gone better. Thanks, mates!

"Josh

Sure I remember him, who doesn't! He is kinda the face of the company, at least in my opinion. It's great that you still keep in touch and live together even beyond work, after the summer. It's good to have friends so close, isn't it?

Yellow Lake sounds so familiar, I checked it out on Google Maps and what I found, I've been there while exploring Maine City! On the eastern side where the Public Library is. You must know this place. There are some baseball fields, a dock and the amazing view over the lake, especially at night. Amazing I still remember as if it was yesterday. I was really surprised I'd enjoy Maine City that much, more than LA, NY or even San Francisco. I realized there I'm rather not a big city guy and I way more prefer a friendly atmosphere and clear air which Maine City definitely has.

My family is also well, thank you and how are your feelings after the fair on the university campus? Do you plan to hire a lot of new staff? I wonder how many of last-year guys return this summer. I bet quiet a few. There must be very important reason not to want to come back there.

Thank you for your answers, Josh, and wish you good luck with all the paperwork!"