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TeacherJapan Posted 7 years ago
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Talking in front of many people can be a torture for some people. They get nervous , especially when they can’t get their points across to their listeners.

  

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teacherJapan Talking in front of many people can be a torture for some people. They get nervous , especially when they can’t get their points across to their listeners. It is fine.

  • teacherJapan Talking in front of many people can be a torture for some people.
  • They get nervous , especially when they can’t get their points across to their listeners.
  • It is fine.
  • I think you can replace "listeners" with "audience"
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teacherJapanTalking in front of many people can be a torture for some people. They get nervous , especially when they can’t get their points across to their listeners.

It is fine. I think you can replace "listeners" with "audience"

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Talking in front of a crowd is torture for some people. They get nervous , especially when they can’t get their point across to their listeners.

The repetition of "people" was awkward. "Crowd" is usual in this context, and in this setting it does not have the pejorative connotations it often has. "Torture" in uncountable here. "Can be" was redundant with "some". "Points" meant that each

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