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Safrar Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Could you check this

I'm getting ready to send my friend a package and wrote a letter in rough. Please check a part of it.

I got a new liquid soap for body. While using it, I found it smelled very nice and thought you might like it. That content in the smaller bottle is also the same soap. I'd be glad if I can share something with your mother as well. Please give her the smell when you visit.

Thank you.
  

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Safrar I got a new liquid soap for body. While using it, I found it smelled very nice and thought you might like it. That content in the smaller bottle is also the same soap.

— CalifJim

  • Safrar I got a new liquid soap for body.
  • While using it, I found it smelled very nice and thought you might like it.
  • That content in the smaller bottle is also the same soap.
  • I'd be glad if I can share something with your mother as well.
  • Please give her the smell when you visit.
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SafrarI got a new liquid soap for body. While using it, I found it smelled very nice and thought you might like it. That content in the smaller bottle is also the same soap. I'd be glad if I can share something with your mother as well. Please give her the smell when you visit.
I got some new liquid body soap. I noticed how nice it smelled, and I thought you
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Thank you.

So, I know what the verb "enclose" means, but I'm not sure why present perfect "have enclosed" is used in that case. Could you explain, please?
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SafrarThank you.So, I know what the verb "enclose" means, but I'm not sure why present perfect "have enclosed" is used in that case. Could you explain, please?
The action of enclosing the bottle in the package took place in the past.
This fact is relevant for the present because the bottle is now in the package and you are telling someone that it's
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Thank you, CJ.

I attempted to write about how to use the bottle too. Please correct any mistakes.
”Hold the corrugated part of the ***** cap and turn the nozzle counterclockwise until it pops up, then it becomes a pump.”
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SafrarHold the corrugated part of the ***** cap and turn the nozzle counterclockwise until it pops up, then it becomes a pump.
I would end this a little differently.

... until it pops up, and it becomes a pump.

Otherwise, fine.

CJ
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Okay, thank you for everything.
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