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TeacherJapan Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Could you check these sentences about luck?

You feel happiest when your life-long dream comes true. To make it happen, luck, not to mention hard work and perseverance is absolutely necessary.
  

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There should be a comma after "perseverance". This closes off the parenthetical phrase. Otherwise, it is all OK.

— GPY

  • There should be a comma after "perseverance".
  • This closes off the parenthetical phrase.
  • Otherwise, it is all OK.
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There should be a comma after "perseverance". This closes off the parenthetical phrase. Otherwise, it is all OK.

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