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Could you check these sentences?

I translated Japanese article into English one.

Does it make sense to you? Could you check it if it is ok or not.



The Oriental zodiac has the twelve signs of the Chinese Zodiac and also, the Occidental astrology has twelve signs,
Considering that fact, the number 12 is supposed to be a magical one. According to one theory, because the number 12 can be divided by any of 2,3,4, and 6, it is considered that we are unlikely to have trouble when dividing 12 things. That's why that number proves to be useful.

On this article, we are supposed to use the expression " the twelve signs of the Chinese Zodiac", " be divided" , and " be
useful".

Thank you.
  

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The Oriental zodiac has the twelve signs of the Chinese Zodiac, as does Occidental astrology. Considering that, the number 12 is thought to be a magical one. According to one theory, because the number 12 can be divided by any of the following numbers -- 2,3,4, and 6--, it is considered that we are unlikely to have trouble when dividing 12 things.

  • The Oriental zodiac has the twelve signs of the Chinese Zodiac, as does Occidental astrology.
  • Considering that, the number 12 is thought to be a magical one.
  • According to one theory, because the number 12 can be divided by any of the following numbers -- 2,3,4, and 6--, it is considered that we are unlikely to have trouble when dividing 12 things.
  • That's why that number 12 proves to be useful.
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The Oriental zodiac has the twelve signs of the Chinese Zodiac, as does Occidental astrology.
Considering that, the number 12 is thought to be a magical one. According to one theory, because the number 12 can be divided by any of the following numbers -- 2,3,4, and 6--, it is considered that we are unlikely to have trouble when dividing 12 things. That's why that number 12 proves to
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