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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

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Dear Sir,

I, Robert Bari, hereby request your kind attention to the fact that, on 3rd October 2012, the authority of DDR International terminated seven staff members because of their financial crisis. I am one of them. Now it is essential for me to get a job to maintain my family. I am looking for a suitable position in your organization commensurate with my qualifications and experience. With this application I have attached my resume and a recent photograph for your kind perusal and necessary action.

I have hands-on experience in child sponsorship, community development and project management, making me an ideal candidate, and I am confident that I would be an important asset for your organization through my dedication, sincerity, and committed professionalism.

I look forward to the opportunity for a personal interview. If you require further information, please contact me at ..........com or ..................

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.
  

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I would suggest the following: Dear Sirs As you will be aware, I am one of the seven staff members whose contract of employment was terminated by DDR International on 3rd October 2012 due to the organisation’s financial crisis. As I have a family to maintain, I am most anxious to get a job and I would be grateful if you would consider me for a suitable position in your organisation commensurate with my qualifications and experience. I have attached a copy of my CV and a recent photograph for your kind perusal.

  • I would suggest the following: Dear Sirs As you will be aware, I am one of the seven staff members whose contract of employment was terminated by DDR International on 3rd October 2012 due to the organisation’s financial crisis.
  • As I have a family to maintain, I am most anxious to get a job and I would be grateful if you would consider me for a suitable position in your organisation commensurate with my qualifications and experience.
  • I have attached a copy of my CV and a recent photograph for your kind perusal.
  • I have hands-on experience in child sponsorship, community development and project management, which I believe make me an ideal candidate and I am confident that I would be an asset to your organisation through my dedication, reliability and committed professionalism.
  • I would greatly appreciate the opportunity for a personal interview.
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I would suggest the following:

Dear Sirs

As you will be aware, I am one of the seven staff members whose contract of employment was terminated by DDR International on 3rd October 2012 due to the organisation’s financial crisis.

As I have a family to maintain, I am most anxious to get a job and I would be grateful if you would consider me for a suitable position in

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