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Eser Gungor Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Could you check please my cover letter for master scholarship?Any advice appreciated!
Dreams,entrepreneuring,exchange,integration,multicultural spots
Keywords of tomorrow's world.
I had born in a small regional town in ....,During my childhood,i always tried to build my own toys with my childish imagination,and i have enjoyed to see different things,places and people who I've never seen before.I identify this situation with two words “discovering passion”.because of that i have chosen Architecture.And now it made me to apply to .... programme.
A dream,an entrepreneuring idea,a future international firm,its name is ......Transmitting of childhood passions to a professional framework.Already being applied for national governmental young entrepreneuring fund. Firm will be based on two distinct branch,As name of it reflects,first part will be composed of to transmit and transform regional arts-crafts styles to modern furniture designs and second part wil be composed of retrofitting,repairing and renovating of existing buildings.
During 50's,rapid urbanization movement affected ..... as well as every developing country,still we are having problems of that period,and we have huge regions remaining shaped in this way.Here is an example short video explains situation about urban renewal in .......
Due to this reasons,i tried to manage my professional background in this way,last summer,to get erasmus student placement scholarship from my home university,i had to give up last two lectures of my bachelor to benefit this scholarship,eventually i got it and succefully made my internship.
During the internship place searching,i got many positive answers,from private architecture practices,and universities,but i have made my choice on .....
Throughout my internship,i have attended works of ...... project.It was following project after EU funded Project which is called “Energy efficiency and sustainability in retrofitted and new museum buildings” According to my career aspects,i have found a chance to experience more about retrofitting and renovating projects on existing public buildings.During school projects and at my bachelor erasmus exchange period in ....,i have chosen projects on energy efficiency and sustainability in buildings subject.
Eventually,upon completion of the ...... programme,i am going to focus on my future job idea,after i come back my country,I can confidently state that...... programme will be big plus to my professional background I would like toparticipate in....... programme thus I believe that this program will improve my point of view in life in many ways and will give me a chance to introduce
myself and my future global entrepreneuring idea in a global environment and where I can share with appropriate people.And it will pave the way for making global collaborations Additionally,
if i have a chance to learn the language of the host countries will be big opportunity in this case.
Lastly, joining to this program is essential for me since second international experience has a lot to provide to my education and personal development. I believe that my personal skills and ambition to have a good career in this rapid globalization will help me to make a positive contribution too.
Keywords of tomorrow's world.
I had born in a small regional town in ....,During my childhood,i always tried to build my own toys with my childish imagination,and i have enjoyed to see different things,places and people who I've never seen before.I identify this situation with two words “discovering passion”.because of that i have chosen Architecture.And now it made me to apply to .... programme.
A dream,an entrepreneuring idea,a future international firm,its name is ......Transmitting of childhood passions to a professional framework.Already being applied for national governmental young entrepreneuring fund. Firm will be based on two distinct branch,As name of it reflects,first part will be composed of to transmit and transform regional arts-crafts styles to modern furniture designs and second part wil be composed of retrofitting,repairing and renovating of existing buildings.
During 50's,rapid urbanization movement affected ..... as well as every developing country,still we are having problems of that period,and we have huge regions remaining shaped in this way.Here is an example short video explains situation about urban renewal in .......
Due to this reasons,i tried to manage my professional background in this way,last summer,to get erasmus student placement scholarship from my home university,i had to give up last two lectures of my bachelor to benefit this scholarship,eventually i got it and succefully made my internship.
During the internship place searching,i got many positive answers,from private architecture practices,and universities,but i have made my choice on .....
Throughout my internship,i have attended works of ...... project.It was following project after EU funded Project which is called “Energy efficiency and sustainability in retrofitted and new museum buildings” According to my career aspects,i have found a chance to experience more about retrofitting and renovating projects on existing public buildings.During school projects and at my bachelor erasmus exchange period in ....,i have chosen projects on energy efficiency and sustainability in buildings subject.
Eventually,upon completion of the ...... programme,i am going to focus on my future job idea,after i come back my country,I can confidently state that...... programme will be big plus to my professional background I would like toparticipate in....... programme thus I believe that this program will improve my point of view in life in many ways and will give me a chance to introduce
myself and my future global entrepreneuring idea in a global environment and where I can share with appropriate people.And it will pave the way for making global collaborations Additionally,
if i have a chance to learn the language of the host countries will be big opportunity in this case.
Lastly, joining to this program is essential for me since second international experience has a lot to provide to my education and personal development. I believe that my personal skills and ambition to have a good career in this rapid globalization will help me to make a positive contribution too.
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I don't think that any of us will be motivated to read and suggest corrections on text where I is not capitalized and it's full of careless spacing and bad punctuation. It's just too tedious.
- I don't think that any of us will be motivated to read and suggest corrections on text where I is not capitalized and it's full of careless spacing and bad punctuation.
- It's just too tedious.
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I don't think that any of us will be motivated to read and suggest corrections on text where I is not capitalized and it's full of careless spacing and bad punctuation. It's just too tedious.
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hmm.. not bad,.
hey dude,. if you living in US, you can try www.scholarshipzone.us ,.
from my sister exp,. she got a scholarship....iam try too
hey dude,. if you living in US, you can try www.scholarshipzone.us ,.
from my sister exp,. she got a scholarship....iam try too
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