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Speakerleo Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could you check my writing, thanks

Please check if it has any error. I can learn from my errors. Thanks

The exercise bike in the exercise room has some problems. I set foot on the pedal to turn in order to do workout. In the middle of the turning, the conveyor belt inside is suddenly very loose. It happens exactly the same if you keep turning the wheel.

  

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Here is some natural English for you to consider. The bike in the exercise room has some problems. I started to pedal and suddenly the belt inside felt very loose.

  • Here is some natural English for you to consider.
  • The bike in the exercise room has some problems.
  • I started to pedal and suddenly the belt inside felt very loose.
  • It happens every time I pedal.
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Here is some natural English for you to consider.

The bike in the exercise room has some problems. I started to pedal and suddenly the belt inside felt very loose. It happens every time I pedal.

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