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Domdom Posted 9 years ago

Could you check my writing, please?

They've been waiting for Santa

All my friends are waiting for him

Who will give gifts


I had been asked my mom

When my dad comes

She said he would come for Christmas


On Christmas Day

My dad's gonna come

In Santa suits


Because I read a story in a book about a father in the Santa disguise

Who gives away presents

My dad will come for me with him hidden behind beard, too


My friends just believe in

Never figure out who hides in the red clothes

Santa Claus visitied them


My friends wait for Santa for Christmas

Just for their gifts

They just wish eveyday was christmas with the gifts


My dad will come in Santa suits

To surprise me

I wish everyday was Christmas, too


My friends who say that they saw Santa

My friends who say that they met Santa

I will say I finally met my dad


A father Santa who is nervous and worried not to be discovered

I'm going to wait for Santa

I'm going to fall into his arms with figuring out everything about him


A real Santa Claus hidden behind the fake beard

A Santa Claus who have one to greet him

Even if he doesn't bring any presents

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I wish eveyday was Christmas


Thank you for reading my writing and your correction!

  

Top answer

They've been waiting for Santa— All my friends are waiting for him. He'll give them gifts. " She said he would come for Christmas.

  • They've been waiting for Santa— All my friends are waiting for him.
  • He'll give them gifts.
  • " She said he would come for Christmas.
  • On Christmas Day, my dad's gonna come in a Santa suit!
  • Because I read a story in a book about a father in a Santa disguise who gives away presents.
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They've been waiting for Santa—

All my friends are waiting for him.

He'll give them gifts.


I asked my mom,

"When will my dad come?"

She said he would come for Christmas.


On Christmas Day,

my dad's gonna come

in a Santa suit!


Because I read a story in a book ab

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