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Domdom Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Could you check my writing, please?

Don't grow lonely and live with being loved. Give your clear opinions all the time. Don't lost your own opinion but don't be insist. It must offend others. if you have dream, try to come true anytime. You don't have to hesitate. It will be all for you. Experience many people and see them. It could make you know about yourself well. You don't need to read people's mind(?). It will make yourself smaller. People don't care about what you do as much as you think.
  

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domdom Don't grow lonely and live with being loved. Did you mean Don't grow lonely but live with love ? domdom Give your clear opinions all the time.

  • domdom Don't grow lonely and live with being loved.
  • Did you mean Don't grow lonely but live with love ?
  • domdom Give your clear opinions all the time.
  • Always give/express your opinions clearly sounds better to me.
  • domdom Don't lost your own opinion but don't be insist.
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domdomDon't grow lonely and live with being loved.
Did you mean Don't grow lonely but live with love?
domdomGive your clear opinions all the time.
Always give/express your opinions clearly sounds better to me.
domdom
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Gigilian NguyenDid you mean Don't grow lonely but live with love?
I am trying to say "Don't grow lonely and live being loved".(?)

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