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Don't grow lonely and live with being loved. Give your clear opinions all the time. Don't lost your own opinion but don't be insist. It must offend others. if you have dream, try to come true anytime. You don't have to hesitate. It will be all for you. Experience many people and see them. It could make you know about yourself well. You don't need to read people's mind(?). It will make yourself smaller. People don't care about what you do as much as you think.

Gigilian Nguyen · Accepted Answer

domdomDon't grow lonely and live with being loved.

Did you mean Don't grow lonely but live with love?

domdomGive your clear opinions all the time.

Always give/express your opinions clearly sounds better to me.

domdomDon't ~~lost~~ your own opinion but don't be insist.

lose - lost - lost
I have never heard anything like ~~to lose an opinion~~. Did you mean Don't change your own opinion(s)? If you want to use lose, Don't lose faith in your own opinion(s) should work.

Insist is a verb, one of the first things a learner of English has to remember: After to be is:
1. a noun (My mother is a teacher OR She is Maria - Maria is a name, a name is a noun)
2. an adjective (Don't be silly!)
3. the -ing form to make the continuous aspect (I am working)
4. the -ed form to make the passive voice (This Japanese food is called sushi)
5. a prepositional phrase (My house is by the sea)
Try again!

domdomIt must offend others.

I'm sorry but I don't understand why this sentence is here...

domdomif you have dream, ~~try to come true anytime.~~

If you have dreams, (do) try to make them come true!

domdomIt will be all for you

How about It will be all yours? But... What is it here?

domdomExperience many people and see them. It could make you know about yourself well.

I would say Meet people and learn about them OR Learn to see/understand the people you meet.

In one sentence: Learn to see/understand the people you meet and that will help you understand better about yourself OR Learning to understand the people you meet will help you understand better about yourself.

domdom You don't need to read people's mind(?). It will make yourself smaller.

You don't need the ability to read people's minds/someone's mind.

domdomPeople don't care about what you do as much as you think.

How about trying to write this in another way? I don't really understand what you mean here.
Some advice:
-You can use online translating websites like Google Translate for new words, but never trust them with grammar!
-A REAL dictionary will be your best friend.
-Read more about the way people write.
Good luck!
GN
P/s: Not a teacher or a native speaker of English!

Domdom · Answer

Gigilian NguyenDid you mean Don't grow lonely but live with love?

I am trying to say "Don't grow lonely and live being loved".(?)

Could you check my writing, please?

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