Could you check my writing?

I got the idea and some sentences from a song called Little Black Sandals by Sia.

I was being dragged down, down by the hand. It was such a big and huge hole that it looked like sucking me constantly. It was already feeding on me even before the hand of a golden giant man killed me. There was nothing but dark and the echo of my dragging and the footsteps of the giant man. I couldn't even shout and struggle. The hand didn't stop dragging me. "Why are you doing this to me? I have nothing to give you. I don't have a house, money and my family. Nothing. And I'm so small for you to eat." My voice was trembling. The giant didn't budge an inch. I felt so sad that I realised I couldn't remember nothing special in my life despite the death was right before me like this. I didn't even have things I would leave and people I would miss before dying. The golden big giant said, "I eat your fear of me. I don't want anything but it. Anybody who is caught by me is eaten, because everybody is scared of me". I said, "Now you can't eat me, because I'm full of vain about my life. It isn't fear, it's a regret. What were my days? If I had my family and friends, I would be fearful I couldn't stay with them any more. I don't feel scared of you. I just feel empty about not trying to achieve a lot of things that I could get if I made an effort". The giant got angry. He roared and found my regret took over the dead of him. The angry giant crushed my knuckles and splitted my skin. "It doesn't gives me any fear." And I told my feet to move it. I hope they have a plan. These little black sandals started to walk me away and head the right way. They saved my life today. So now I was free from the big bad giant who was stalking me .

Thank you!