Could you check my writing?

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I'm writing this becuase I forgot to put my message when I registered the postcard from you. And I saw Radiohead's show about three years ago summer. It was only their first gig in Korea. They had never come here before so I coudn't believe that they were performing in front of me! Oh, I am listening to their song by chance now. Anyway, I saw Muse two days ago. They came here for their concert. And of course I know Blur! Everybody who likes Oasis will know or like them. (Or maybe hate them!) And I saw your photos on your facebook page. You are a photographer! Even though I can't understand your language, German, I can see your wonderful photos. Thank you. All good wishes to you!

Teechr · Accepted Answer

What does this bit mean?

domdomwhen I registered the postcard from you.

Domdom · Answer

It is supposed that if I received a postcard, I register the postcard to let him or her know that I received their postcard and I can send a message to them with the registeration. This writing is a message with the registeration.

Teechr · Answer

domdomI'm writing this because I forgot to ~~put~~ include my (return) message when I registered ~~the~~ for receipt of your postcard. ~~from you.~~ ~~And~~ I wanted to say that I saw Radiohead's show about three ~~years ago~~ summers ago. It was ~~only~~ their first gig in Korea. They had never come here before, so I couldn't believe that they were performing (right) in front of me! Oh, I am listening to their song by chance now. Anyway, I saw Muse two days ago. They came here for their concert. And of course I know Blur! Everybody who likes Oasis will know or like them, or maybe hate them! And I saw your photos on your Facebook page. You are a photographer! Even though I can't understand your language, German, I can see your wonderful photos. Thank you. All good wishes to you!

Domdom · Answer

<img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/1.gif' alt='Emotion: smile'/> Thank you very much.

Teechr · Answer

You're welcome. <img class='emoticon' style='Width:19px;Height:19px;' data-delaysrc='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/5.gif' src='https://uat-englishforward-forums-backend.s3.us-west-2.amazonaws.com/Emoticons/5.gif' alt='Emotion: wink'/>

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