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Domdom Posted 11 years ago
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Could you check my writing?

Today I cleaned up my desk. I opened the window and pick some book from the shelf to arrange them well again. I wiped my desk with a clean towel. I've bought some books recently. So there was no shelf for them. I still haven't put them on! they are just piled up on the desk. It is never shown that I arranged my desk!
  

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Here is how I would write it. Today I cleaned up my desk. I opened the window and picked some books off the shelf to arrange them in order [OR "to organize them"].

  • Here is how I would write it.
  • Today I cleaned up my desk.
  • I opened the window and picked some books off the shelf to arrange them in order [OR "to organize them"].
  • I also wiped my desk with a clean towel.
  • I'd bought some more books recently.
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Here is how I would write it.

Today I cleaned up my desk. I opened the window and picked some books off the shelf to arrange them in order [OR "to organize them"]. I also wiped my desk with a clean towel. I'd bought some more books recently. So there was no shelf space for them. I still haven't put them away. T

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