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Slowloris Posted 16 years ago
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Could you check my sentence?

Hello, everyone

I'd like to send email to my colleague who did not reply my request.

Could you please check following sentence?

"Although/Though you don't need to prepare the new document, you need to revise the file based on my last comments."

Thank you
  

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Hi, I'd like to send email to my colleague who did not reply my request. Could you please check following sentence? " This sounds a bit like you are this person's boss.

— Clive

  • Hi, I'd like to send email to my colleague who did not reply my request.
  • Could you please check following sentence?
  • " This sounds a bit like you are this person's boss.
  • Have you considered softening it a bit?
  • eg please .
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Hi,

I'd like to send email to my colleague who did not reply my request.

Could you please check following sentence?

"Although/Though you don't need to prepare the new document, you need to revise the file based on my last comments."

"Although/Though you don't need to prepare a the new document, you need to revise the file based on my last
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Hi, Clive

Thank you for your comments and suggestions.

I'll change the sentence.

>Would it be possible for you to send me the revised file by tomorrow?

>I would appreciate if you would revise the file based on my last comments.

Thanks again, if I sent email to my colleague without your suggestions, I were almost in trouble with him.

slow
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Hi Clive,

Thanks a lot for your comments, today i have learnt this new way of asking in a polite manner.

Thanks,

Krish.
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