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Could you confirm it whether it is fine or not?
Thank you.Surprisingly, some human are born-immuned to AIDS and one American guy, named Timothy Ray Brown, is officially first-cured of AIDS after getting bone marrow transplant from donor with this 'HIV immune' gene.
  

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Hi, Could you confirm it whether it is fine or not? Thank you. Surprisingly, some human are born-immuned to AIDS and one American guy, named Timothy Ray Brown, is officially first-cured of AIDS after getting bone marrow transplant from donor with this 'HIV immune' gene.

  • Hi, Could you confirm it whether it is fine or not?
  • Thank you.
  • Surprisingly, some human are born-immuned to AIDS and one American guy, named Timothy Ray Brown, is officially first-cured of AIDS after getting bone marrow transplant from donor with this 'HIV immune' gene.
  • Surprisingly, some people are born with immunity to AIDS.
  • An American named Timothy Ray Brown is officially the first person cured of AIDS, after getting a bone marrow transplant from a donor with this 'HIV immune' gene.
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Could you confirm it whether it is fine or not?
Thank you.Surprisingly, some human are born-immuned to AIDS and one American guy, named Timothy Ray Brown, is officially first-cured of AIDS after getting bone marrow transplant from donor with this 'HIV immune' gene.

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