Could you check my recommendation letter?

To the college director of admissions

It is with great pleasure that I recommend Shion Wakayama to attend your college. For three years, she was a student in my English grammar and reading class.

She was an outstanding student. Her interest in learning English allowed her to develop her English skills and earn high scores on the exams. She was always enthusiastic about discussing various subjects pertaining to foreign cultures and voicing her opinions about current events. She took on leadership roles in classroom discussions and challenged her fellow students by raising interesting questions and making intelligent comments. Shion was an impressive student, always active in class.

She hopes to develop and improve her English skills and study marine biology in order to be a dolphin trainer. I am confident she is qualified to attend your college and will succeed in her studies. It is without reservation that I wholeheartedly recommend Shion Wakayama to attend your college.