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Safrar Posted 12 years ago
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This was very difficult to write, especially choosing tenses. Please correct any mistakes.
A few days ago, on a website, I came across a flag with a place name and a lot of people's names on it, and I noticed it had belonged to a unit in a war and also they all had been from a village that is not so far from my great-grand father's one. That was really surprising. He'd died on a warship in the war. Now I believe that his name is still in the sea. I wish I could see it, at least.
A few days ago, on a website, I came across a flag with a place name and a lot of people's names on it, and I noticed it had belonged to a unit in a war and also they all had been from a village that is not so far from my great-grand father's one. That was really surprising. He'd died on a warship in the war. Now I believe that his name is still in the sea. I wish I could see it, at least.
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A few days ag o o n a website, I came across a flag with a place name and a lot of people's names on it, and I noticed that it had belonged to a military unit in a war and that they all had been from a village near my great-grandfath er's. That was really surprising. He died on a warship that was sunk in the war.
- A few days ag o o n a website, I came across a flag with a place name and a lot of people's names on it, and I noticed that it had belonged to a military unit in a war and that they all had been from a village near my great-grandfath er's.
- That was really surprising.
- He died on a warship that was sunk in the war.
- Now I believe that his name is still in the sea.
- I wish I could see it.
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A few days ago on a website, I came across a flag with a place name and a lot of people's names on it, and I noticed that it had belonged to a military unit in a war and that they all had been from a village near my great-grandfather's. That was really surprising. He died on a warship that was sunk in the war. Now I believe that his name i
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Thank you, Mister Micawber.
I made these sentences to learn from previous mistakes. Could you check them again, please?
- Her home is near mine.
- My grandmother told me that her father had died in a war and that her mother had received official notice of his death.
I made these sentences to learn from previous mistakes. Could you check them again, please?
- Her home is near mine.
- My grandmother told me that her father had died in a war and that her mother had received official notice of his death.
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