Could you check my motivation letter for university?

I’m finishing my last year of high school education. My dream is studying Marketing Management in Denmark, because I’m interested in business topics and I believe that the University XYZ will help me to get the best education.

Studying abroad means meeting a lot of people from different countries with diversified background, and as a result, with different way of seeing world. This would allow me to look at problems from another side. I am convinced that studying abroad would broaden my mind.

Public

Relations- I liked in that possibility of making real relation with people and representing person or company as trustworthy.

Cognitive

Science - I'm interested in how people's brain works and what influence on people's behavior.

Psychology - Similiar to cognitive science, I like learning about people, what makes them feel specific emotions or how to get them interested.

Media and Communication - There was a time I wanted to work in advertisement company. Concious creating image always seemed interesting for me.

Then I released that Marketing Management connects all this things. It includes everything I'm interested to. Furthermore, I think that after graduating I'll have plenty of possibilities and I won't be limited to strictly job. That is the reason why I've chosen Marketing Management.

Piano

I have been playing piano since primary school. At first it was hard, but I've put a lot of effort in that and after everyday practice with loads of patience I've become good pianist. Now I can tell that with strong will and hard work almost averything can be achieved.

Ballet

When I was dancing in a group it wasn't only about practicing and being good but also about being able to work with others, being synchronized, moving in this same way. The failure of one had an impact on the whole group. That means that we needed to rely on and trust each other.

Sports

I used to play volleyball for 5 years and tennis for 3 years. Volleyball is also about team work, such as debel in tennis. But not the winning is always important. I needed to learn how to cope with looses, don't give up and draw conclusions. The winning isn't always important. Sometimes it is about having good time with people.

Volunteering

I took part in many charities raises but there was the one that kept in my mind.

It was Noble Box Project. Me and my class choose a family and raised money to buy what they needed the most. Me and 3 classmates, as representatives, were to give it to this family. I'll never forget the look of the woman who saw all this boxes. She baked for us cookies and wrote beautiful letter to my class. In that moment I realized that good always come back and it's always worth to help others.

Future

When people ask me about my future, they expect a specific answer, but I think that most people in that young age don't really know that. The best way to find out is trying different things, being open-minded and do what makes them happy. There are few people who really knows what they're going to do. The rest just haven't known other possibilities. That's the reason why I don't want to give any specific answer.

All I know is that I would like to work with people and for people. Developing connects with breaking the schemes, learning something new from others, questioning and exploring. That is the reason why connection with other people is so important.

Conclusion

Studying abroad is going to be challenging but after all it will certainly give me an excellent education.

I'll cross my boundaries and develop as a person and as a group member.

Thank you in advance for your consideration and time