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Domdom Posted 10 years ago
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Could you check my letter, please?

Someone who works in the music industry sent a letter and I'm sending this back.

Hello. Your postcard really surprised me! I saw Radiohead only one time four years ago. They had never come here to Korea, but we were all glad when they announced that they were having a concert for the first time in Korea. And finally I'm going to Coldplay concert next year. They've never come for concert to Korea so far, so all fans who love British music are looking forward to the concert day. In next month, I'm going to Two Door Cinema Club's concert. It's my third times.

Thank you!
  

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domdom Hello. Your postcard really surprised me! I saw Radiohead only one time four years ago.

— Teechr

  • domdom Hello.
  • Your postcard really surprised me!
  • I saw Radiohead only one time four years ago.
  • They had never come here to Korea before , but we were all glad when they announced that they were having a concert for the first time in Korea.
  • And finall y, I'm going to the Coldplay concert next year.
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domdomHello. Your postcard really surprised me! I saw Radiohead only one time four years ago. They had never come here to Korea before, but we were all glad when they announced that they were having a concert for the first time in Korea. And finally, I'm going to the Coldplay concert next year. They've never come for played a concert
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domdomone time
This is wordy considering that the word once is sufficient.
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