could you check my letter??

Dear mom,
I,m fine how is going your life? Yesterday i went to park some children was playing hocky there when i saw that i remember my childhood. Do remember mom when i was child my dream become a hocky player i used to pray god for i play with maurice richad who was famous player in monreal. my childhood friends all of them were his fans. we wore monreal uniform with his lucky number 9. when you felt, that was small to me you decided to buy a new sweater. but you didn't like to buy a regular store you mailed to a new sweter in monsieur Eato. they send sweter when i saw that. i was shocked becouse the sweter toronto maple life swater i didn't like to wear that. i had never seen any one wore that in my village. but when i ready to game, i was obliged to wear that.
I went to take my usual position but leader not allowed to play me. then i went to church and asked him to send a new sweater as quickly as possible, Toronto maple leafs sweater would be eaten....
what ever everything is nice memory