Could you check my friendly letter ?

Dear Miss Paola,

Hi there, how are you doing today ?, well I'm ok, but I'm here to tell you what's going on my mind when I write. When I want to start a new piece of writing, generally I listen to some music to get some creativity going on. I want my writing to make you feel exactly what my characters are feeling at the moment, make you immerge in the wonderful world of my words and lastly, to make you somehow a better person; so that would be my purpose.

Writing; what I like about it; that's such a difficult question to answer; but it's worth a try; I believe you can express your feelings through it; anonymously or with your name in it; you can let your imagination run free and also you are creating something that comes from your mind. Ed Sheeran is a popular musician that inspires me to write because when I listen to his songs; I can sense all the emotions and messages that he wants to tell the world through his music, I recommend his new album 'Divide' because it's just wonderful to listen and I'm listening to it, while I'm writing this.

Last year we had this assignment to create our own planet, so I called my planet 'Work Machine' because the people from there,work non stop and didn't have any emotions at all because it causes troubles after humans partially destroy the world, and I really liked the project because I wrote it thinking about a possible future for us, since there's so much hatred and evil in the world that we don't see. With this said, my favorite kind of books are futuristic because it lets you think what could actually happen to Earth and human race in a soon future and they are very descriptive with the setting since it isn't real.

Yours Truly,

Eva