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The two pie charts compare the percentage of virtual shopping sales for four retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. These were electronics and appliance, food and beverage, home furnishings and video games.

Overall, there was an increase in two sectors, video games and food and beverage, in contrast to the drop in electronics and appliance and home furnishings. In 2005, electronics and appliance had the highest proportion in online shopping sale, but it was overtaken by food and beverage in five years later.

In detail, since the 5% rise in video games offset by a 5% decline in electronics and applicance, the sum was consistent, with about 53%. Similarly, the total of two other sectors had no change during the period shown. The ordering (electronics and appliance, home furnishings, food and beverage, video games) in 2005 was not consistent with the one in 2010. Electronics and appliance made up 35% of the total sale, which doubled the value for video games by 2005. In 2010, the ratio was 2:1 in other sectors, electronics and appliance and home furnishings, 30% and 15% respectively.