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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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Could You Check My Essay Please

I've got a Physics essay and it's due next week. Could you check my essay please?

When we are listening to a radio. We hear the sound coming from the radio. How does this happen? However, this is call the wave phenomenon. What is it? Why does it have something to do with the radio?
Wave is a disturbance pass through a medium. Technically, a radio antenna act as an medium while the disturbance is a kind of waveform send from a radio station. Moreover, electricity flowing into the transmitter antenna makes electrons vibrate up and down, then the radio wave travel through the air arriving at the receiver antenna, making electrons vibrate inside it.
In conclusion, The wave arrives at the receiver antenna, vibrating, making the speaker vibrates, then the sound comes through the radio's speaker.

  

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The first two sentences are redundant. The word "this" in the third sentence refers to something specific. State what that is to start your paragraph.

  • The first two sentences are redundant.
  • The word "this" in the third sentence refers to something specific.
  • State what that is to start your paragraph.
  • You have several errors in subject-verb agreement.
  • The wave phenomenon refers to the sound we hear coming from a radio.
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The first two sentences are redundant. The word "this" in the third sentence refers to something specific. State what that is to start your paragraph. You have several errors in subject-verb agreement.

The wave phenomenon refers to the sound we hear coming from a radio. A wave is a disturbance that passes through a medium. Technically, a radio antenna acts as a medium while the disturb

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