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Among different types of films best of all I like comedy drama film, because such films are very cheerful and full of life. A lot of people think that comedy film doesn’t teach anyone, but I don’t think so.
One of the most my favorite comedy drama films is “Click”. Film is written by Steve Koren and Mark O'Keefe.
Mark O'Keefe is a comedy screenwriter for feature films and television. He is well known author. He wrote and produced the 2003 film Bruce Almighty.
Steve Koren is an American screenwriter too. He is a co-writer of the movies Bruce Almighty.
Adam Sandler produced and was the leading character of this film. Sandler played an overworked architect who neglects his family. Michael Newman (Sandler) is a hard working family man, who must please his boss (Hasselhoff), in order to get promoted. One day he gets a remote from Morty, a crazy sales clerk, who has the ultimate remote. A remote in which he can do anything, including muting, skipping and dubbing his life. He finds this to be the opportunity in which he can skip to his promotion. He sees this as a good idea, until the remote goes horribly wrong. Finally he learns that what is the most important in his life. He learns that his family is the most precious thing in his life.
Interpretation of characters is true-to-life for everyone. This film reminded me of the past. When I studied at school I neglected my family because of my friends. At that time I loved to do everything with my friends. I always went shopping with my friends instead of doing something with my family. This made my mom sad.
I think that Frank Coraci directed this film well because there were not any useless scenes included. Moreover there are a lot of good shorts and close-ups are used effectively.
I think this film is worth seeing for everyone, especially for people, who overwork and gets less time with family