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Domdom Posted 11 years ago
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Could you check my English writing, please?

I'm working at a store which is my older sister and her husband's. They are expecting their first baby who is a daughter and being born this month! I am so excited because she is my first nephew in my life! It feels like I made a little and cute friend.

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I'm working at my sister's store. She and her husband are expecting their first baby, a daughter, this month. I am very excited because she will be my first niece.

— Mister Micawber

  • I'm working at my sister's store.
  • She and her husband are expecting their first baby, a daughter, this month.
  • I am very excited because she will be my first niece.
  • It feels like I'm soon to make a cute little friend.
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I'm working at my sister's store. She and her husband are expecting their first baby, a daughter, this month. I am very excited because she will be my first niece. It feels like I'm soon to make a cute little friend.
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Thank you so much!
How about "I'm soon to have a cute little friend"? Emotion: embarrassed It came to me later.

And can I ad
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domdomHow about "I'm soon to have a cute little friend"? It came to me later.
Fine.
domdomAnd can I add more sentences?
Yes.

But sometimes it is hard to believe she exists, because she is still in my sister's belly. So I don't think I will believe it until she is born.
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