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Domdom Posted 11 years ago
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Could you check my English writing, please?

My sister has left a while ago(about 1~2hours ago. I'm not sure it is proper expression). She married so she have to live with her husband. Her room is empty now even thought some stuff is still left. She packed up her stuff (or pack her stuff up) into big boxes yesterday. ("up" can be left out? Like "pack her stuff into big boxes) The boxes were piled up in the living room. Her home is near my home.
Today I am going to work 2 hours earlier. So I'm working 2 hours more.
  

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My sister left a while ago. She is married, so she lives with her husband. Her room is empty now, even though some stuff is still left.

  • My sister left a while ago.
  • She is married, so she lives with her husband.
  • Her room is empty now, even though some stuff is still left.
  • She packed up her stuff in big boxes yesterday.
  • The boxes were piled up in the living room.
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My sister left a while ago. She is married, so she lives with her husband. Her room is empty now, even though some stuff is still left. She packed up her stuff in big boxes yesterday. The boxes were piled up in the living room. Her home is near my home.

Today I am going to work 2 hours earlier, so I'm going to work 2 hours more.

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