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Domdom Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
could you check my English translation?
"listen to this melody. I'm sure it makes you feel comfortable, doesn't it?”
But the princess pulled the cover over her head and put her hands over her ears / stopped her ears.
“This is not for me. It can never do that.” cried the princess.
The forth servant came in her room. He have a beautifully coloured dress in his hand.
“Princess, dress up and look at yourself in the mirror. And see how you look beautiful. No one can deny that you are the mot beautiful in the world.”
But the princess lowered her head.
It made the king more full of anxiety. The king is happy man in the happy palace but whenever he saw his daughter his heart broke
Thank you! .
But the princess pulled the cover over her head and put her hands over her ears / stopped her ears.
“This is not for me. It can never do that.” cried the princess.
The forth servant came in her room. He have a beautifully coloured dress in his hand.
“Princess, dress up and look at yourself in the mirror. And see how you look beautiful. No one can deny that you are the mot beautiful in the world.”
But the princess lowered her head.
It made the king more full of anxiety. The king is happy man in the happy palace but whenever he saw his daughter his heart broke
Thank you! .
Top answer
" But the princess pulled the covers over her head and covered her ears with her hands. ” she cried. The fourth servant came into her room with a beautiful dress in his hands.
- " But the princess pulled the covers over her head and covered her ears with her hands.
- ” she cried.
- The fourth servant came into her room with a beautiful dress in his hands.
- “Princess, please put this on and look in the mirror.
- You'll see how beautiful you are.
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In order to produce natural English in a more effective translation, you must be more free with your paraphrasing:
"Listen to this melody—I'm sure it will cheer you up."
But the princess pulled the covers over her head and covered her ears with her hands.
“It can never do that!” she cried.
The fourth servant came into her room with a beautiful dress in
"Listen to this melody—I'm sure it will cheer you up."
But the princess pulled the covers over her head and covered her ears with her hands.
“It can never do that!” she cried.
The fourth servant came into her room with a beautiful dress in
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"make you feel comfortable" is not good expression?
You wouldn't normally use it?
You wouldn't normally use it?
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domdom"make you feel comfortable" is not good expression?The semantics does not seem to fit the girl's emotional state. It is inappropriate, not incorrect.
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