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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Could you check my English?
Hello. I'd like to have my dialogues checked.
No.1
M: Look at this. Tom forgot to endorse the back of his check.
[sign his check]
F: Not again. He didn't sign it last time either.
What shall we do?
M: Well, we'll just have to pitch in some money anyway.
No.2
M: Flight 41 will be arriving at Gate 7.
F: Will it be on time?
M: I'm sorry, but it will be around [about] thirty minutes late
because of the dense [heavy / thick] fog.
Thank you!
No.1
M: Look at this. Tom forgot to endorse the back of his check.
[sign his check]
F: Not again. He didn't sign it last time either.
What shall we do?
M: Well, we'll just have to pitch in some money anyway.
No.2
M: Flight 41 will be arriving at Gate 7.
F: Will it be on time?
M: I'm sorry, but it will be around [about] thirty minutes late
because of the dense [heavy / thick] fog.
Thank you!
Top answer
This looks pretty much OK to me. " and the digits. For example, " No.
- This looks pretty much OK to me.
- " and the digits.
- For example, " No.
- 1 " I'd be tempted to put an exclamation mark after "Not again".
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This looks pretty much OK to me. Just a couple of minor points:
There should be a space between "No." and the digits. For example, "No. 1", not "No.1"
I'd be tempted to put an exclamation mark after "Not again".
There should be a space between "No." and the digits. For example, "No. 1", not "No.1"
I'd be tempted to put an exclamation mark after "Not again".
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