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MY FAVOURITE BOOK
My hobby is reading books especially Harry Potter's book.Of course i make the book as one of my favourite books.It is because the plot is really interesting and the story full of magic.Beside that, all of the characters are very interesting especially Harry Potter and Hermione Granger.The character that i like most in this book is Hermione Granger.She is very cute, clever, and kind wizard.She also very loyal to her her bestfriends, Harry and Ron.
The first time i read the book when i was at Form Four.The first book is Harry Potter and The Sorcerer's Stone.It was about the Harry Potter's life with his uncle,aunt and the bad cousin.He was a very poor boy because they didn't like him either.They treated him like their servant and always punish him although he was innocent.Then,his life changed when he went to the Hogwarts Schools Of Witchcraft and Wizardry.At the school, he met Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger.Then,they became a bestfriend forever and ever.Actually, Harry Potter was the famous boy since his parents were killed by the cruel and bad wizard,Lord Voldermort.He wished to kill Harry but because of the strong power that Harry had,his body was disappear and he only gave Harry a scar.But Lord Voldermort still wanted to kill Harry so the devil spirit had conquered the body of one of Harry's teacher.Harry and his bestfriends,Ron and Hermione have to fight with the devil spirit because he wanted to snatch the Sorcerer's stone.If he got the stone,he will alive and become more stronger than everyone.In the end of this book, Harry finally manage to destroy his enemy. I have got many morals after i read the book.For example,the important of friendship and the true meaning of relationship between friends,parents and teachers.
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