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Peter95 Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Could you check mine essay?
I mean about grammar and tense. Thank you so much!! Im not from England or America.
Plastic surgery is the worst thing in the world. Thousands of people has chosen this type of operation. It should be banned. Why? Because these people after it looks very strange and ugly. This is so harmful for our lifestyle. I will write many arguments ,which proof my opinion.
Firstyly plastic surgery has damaged a lot of people from all the world. Many of them have bacome strange. The fact is that today's society is so full of complexes. For example people who wants to lool like as favourite star or may be a Barbie doll are going to plastic surgeon and then he do one's best/ Without a doubt. For me this type of surgery should be banned. That only disgust others.
Secondly the plastic surgery destroys human's health. Further we can die after some compilations ,which this operation has conjured.
To sum up these arguments I have proven that the plastic surgery should be banned and this is the worst type of operation.
Plastic surgery is the worst thing in the world. Thousands of people has chosen this type of operation. It should be banned. Why? Because these people after it looks very strange and ugly. This is so harmful for our lifestyle. I will write many arguments ,which proof my opinion.
Firstyly plastic surgery has damaged a lot of people from all the world. Many of them have bacome strange. The fact is that today's society is so full of complexes. For example people who wants to lool like as favourite star or may be a Barbie doll are going to plastic surgeon and then he do one's best/ Without a doubt. For me this type of surgery should be banned. That only disgust others.
Secondly the plastic surgery destroys human's health. Further we can die after some compilations ,which this operation has conjured.
To sum up these arguments I have proven that the plastic surgery should be banned and this is the worst type of operation.
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Hi Peter95, I suggest that you read up on how to plan, structure and write an essay, and especially its body paragraphs. Do that, post back and we'll look at your work.
- Hi Peter95, I suggest that you read up on how to plan, structure and write an essay, and especially its body paragraphs.
- Do that, post back and we'll look at your work.
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Hi Peter95,
I suggest that you read up on how to plan, structure and write an essay, and especially its body paragraphs.
Do that, post back and we'll look at your work.
I suggest that you read up on how to plan, structure and write an essay, and especially its body paragraphs.
Do that, post back and we'll look at your work.
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