Could you check it ? "Most interesting job"

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In my opinion the most interesting job is teacher. Teacher is a man who teaches pupils. He needs to be clever, wise, bright and patient person. He's got very responsible kind of job. One must guard students. If teacher takes care nasty students he's got lot's of problems. Unfortunately being teacher is a really stressful job, but if you like the youth that seems almost no problems. He doesn't earn considerable sum of money, obviously not enough.

Actually I have told you disadvantage of being teacher so now I'm tryna say something about advanatage.
So teacher derives benefits from profession. He may take part in a school-trips. He can travel around the world, meet new people, gain experience.

Teacher's got plenty of free time after a work. Also he's got holidays. Then he might chill out, rest and spend time with family. For sure he can rest during weekends.

But all in all I'm not gonna be a teacher. Maybe I consider that if earnings will increase.

Just check it and let me know if there are mistakes.
thanks

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Well, it is a good essay, even though my favorite and best teachers have been women! My cousin is a teacher. She doesn't have a lot of leisure time. She has to make lesson plans, grade papers, order and organize the classroom supplies, meet with the parents, attend teacher education courses and school meetings and do many other things outside of class. But she does earn a good salary, because she is a very good teacher. She loves her job, too.
I have underlined the words with errors (grammar, spelling). These need to be rewritten.

I underlined the places where you made mistakes.

AnonymousIn my opinion, the most interesting job is teacher. A teacher is a man who teaches pupils. He needs to be a clever, wise, bright and patient person. He's got very a responsible kind of job. One must guard students. If teacher takes care nasty students he's got lot's of problems. Unfortunately beinga teacher is a really stressful job, but if you like the youth that seems almost no problems. He doesn't earn a considerable sum of money, obviously not enough (to support a family?).

Actually I have told you the disadvantages of being a teacher so now I'm tryna say something about the advanatages.
So a teacher derives benefits from his profession. He may take part in a school-trips. He can travel around the world, meet new people, and gain experience.

Teacher's got plenty of free time after a work. Also he's got holidays. Then he might chill out, rest and spend time with family. For sure, he can rest during weekends.

But all in all I'm not gonna be a teacher. Maybe I would consider that if the earnings would ~~will~~ increase.

Anonymous · Answer

My english teacher accepts and likes words like gonna, gotta and similar so it doesnt need to correct. Actually it'not essay, i have to tell it next to blackboard. I cant understand what's wrong with underlined sentences so if you may correct it i will be thankful. Thanks for your work Oh i almost forgot, he's got - he has got, is it uncorrect?

AlpheccaStars · Answer

He has got is bad form. If someone has something, just use "has" by itself. Example:

Since I retired, I have a lot of free time.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

If teacher takes care nasty students he's got lot's of problems.

"take care of" is a phrasal verb. It is used for babies, dogs (pets), and people who cannot take care of themselves. For example: I have taken care of my mother since she became blind and too sick to walk.
"lot's" is neither possessive nor an abbreviation of "lot is"

tryna - there is no such word as tryna.
that seems almost no problems -

use "would" or "could" after a conditional (if) clause. If you had money, you would spend it. If you had obnoxious students and were a skilled teacher, you could handle them.
Seem is an intransitive verb, so must be followed by a predicate adjective or noun that agrees with the subject. "That" is singular, so the following noun (problem) must also be singular. Even so, "seem no problem" is awkward. You can say "present almost no problems" .or "be no problem"

Witty grape 522 · Answer

Well the concept which the essay is trying to bring out is almost there. The language should be improved. The essay has lot of important points about a teacher but not beautifully expressed. I am a grade 10 student who is looking for an essay for my assignment.

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